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Paragraph Hook Practice

Paragraph Hook Practice

Q Paragraph Hook Practice Read through the following four paragraph essay. You will notice that there are no transitions between the paragraphs. After you read the whole essay, go back and make transitions between the paragraphs. To do this, look at the first sentences of paragraphs 2, 3, and 4, and either rewrite them or add a whole new sentence before them to create a transition. Your new sentences at the beginning of paragraphs 2, 3, and 4 should include transitional words and/or "hooks" that show the connections between paragraphs. Challenges for Immigrants Anyone who has ever moved from one country to another knows that immigrants face many challenges in their new home. Often the biggest problem is learning a new language. As every immigrant knows, it can take a long time, sometimes many years, for a person to feel comfortable with a second language. Social customs vary from country to country. Different cultures have different customs that they follow for doing business, talking with others, and even eating! Education is often difficult at first for new immigrants. School is hard enough in the first place, but it can be more difficult for someone just learning the language. Still, working hard at school is important, because through education, the new immigrant comes to better understand the culture. This helps a person feel more a part of their new country. Making new friends is never easy, and it can be especially challenging for a new immigrant. Still, this is an important step toward feeling at home in a new country. Usually when people make new friends, they find life in their new country a lot more enjoyable.

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Learning a new language is one of the many challenges faced by anyone who has moved to a new country. Every immigrant is however, aware of the huge time it takes to embrace this new language and feel comfortable about it. Keeping in mind that customs and cultures vary from country to country it makes it more difficult